Noir action suspense WIP

Eddy Lyle · 08-09-2020, 03:14 AM

One page work in progress. A visual proof of concept, for a crime/action/ suspense story I'm planning. Trying to go for a noirish aesthetic:

Groundwork is mostly done I think, just a lot of polishing up to do, most of the final line work (especially in panels 2 and 3) has yet to be done.

Let me know what you think. Any issues with sequential design/story telling?

08-09-2020, 03:14 AM	#1
Eddy Lyle Registered User Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 17	Noir action suspense WIP One page work in progress. A visual proof of concept, for a crime/action/ suspense story I'm planning. Trying to go for a noirish aesthetic: Groundwork is mostly done I think, just a lot of polishing up to do, most of the final line work (especially in panels 2 and 3) has yet to be done. Let me know what you think. Any issues with sequential design/story telling?

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