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Old 05-19-2014, 07:22 PM   #31
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By the way, I loved the comedy in your script. That guy getting shot off-panel had me laughing. As mentioned earlier, you just need to spread it out so it doesn't feel like mood whiplash.
I hear ya, thanks.
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Old 05-19-2014, 07:58 PM   #32
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Wasn't the hostage on the ground when the bullet was fired? I'm not seeing why the bullet would have to (magically) lower in order to hit someone across the street.
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:02 PM   #33
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Alyssa is extremely right! I totally missed that.

So, no magic bullet!
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:06 PM   #34
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And that would also explain why I wasn't getting it.

As well as the writer himself.
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Old 05-20-2014, 10:56 AM   #35
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In my experience, SJ, if multiple people nitpick a variety of things with a script, it could be considered a matter of personal taste. However, if multiple people pick up on the same mistake, there's clearly something that needs to be tweaked. Food for thought.
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