wolverine savage sample

Eroel Mj · 02-13-2015, 12:03 AM

This is an sampels 5 page that I made
perhaps there is some author or editor interested in recruiting for work as a penciler and I am available.

No back-end/percentage of profit deals, please. I gotta eat, y'know.

find me at: deviantart
Email me

hope you like it.

Rob Norton · 02-13-2015, 12:19 AM

You got a lot of great skills. You draw very well.

Cover:
Very nice. But whats with one legged wolverine there? Hulks feel look weird.

Page1:
All very nice but your weirdo panel layout does nothing to help you. Its odd and totally unnecessary and flows in the opposite direction of normal natural page flow where your eye falls thru the page. And stop breakin the panel borders. Some people think you never should. I disagree. I think done right it can look really cool. But i dont think you have an advanced enough understanding to mess with it.

Page 2:
Same...dont bother with breaking the borders.

Page 3:
Hulks face in panel 1 is completely fucked up. His mouth and all that area. Looks really bad. Panel 3 looks amazing.

Your double page spread looks pretty nice.

Just my thoughts here. You draw really well. Work out some small things and you will be there

Rob

02-13-2015, 12:03 AM	#1
Eroel Mj Registered User Join Date: May 2013 Location: Indonesia Posts: 19	wolverine savage sample This is an sampels 5 page that I made perhaps there is some author or editor interested in recruiting for work as a penciler and I am available. No back-end/percentage of profit deals, please. I gotta eat, y'know. find me at: deviantart Email me hope you like it.

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02-13-2015, 12:19 AM	#2
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 3,990	You got a lot of great skills. You draw very well. Cover: Very nice. But whats with one legged wolverine there? Hulks feel look weird. Page1: All very nice but your weirdo panel layout does nothing to help you. Its odd and totally unnecessary and flows in the opposite direction of normal natural page flow where your eye falls thru the page. And stop breakin the panel borders. Some people think you never should. I disagree. I think done right it can look really cool. But i dont think you have an advanced enough understanding to mess with it. Page 2: Same...dont bother with breaking the borders. Page 3: Hulks face in panel 1 is completely fucked up. His mouth and all that area. Looks really bad. Panel 3 looks amazing. Your double page spread looks pretty nice. Just my thoughts here. You draw really well. Work out some small things and you will be there Rob