Trouble composing pages

neil_w2 · 07-29-2022, 09:07 PM

I am trying to figure out how to several pages ... but im not certain how to do it ... obviously ...

the main protagonist gets lured into the washroom ... and the highschool delinquents beat her up and give her a swirly

im thinking of adding a section where they take her wig and flush it it and the toilet clogs and floods

seems like however i compose it i cant get the pacing and the flow right ... the first pages seem too conjested and cluttered ... too much is going on its distracting ... and the other pages ... well ... if i space things out too much the flow kinda slows down with more pages ... im not certain what to do im open to suggestions ...

https://imgur.com/a/UPUSdFn

hmmm ... maybe if i used these somehow instead ...

https://imgur.com/a/eTcOQI7

ah hell ... its not like anyone cares about my IP so maybe it doesnt really matter how I approach this :/

07-29-2022, 09:07 PM	#1
neil_w2 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 15	Trouble composing pages I am trying to figure out how to several pages ... but im not certain how to do it ... obviously ... the main protagonist gets lured into the washroom ... and the highschool delinquents beat her up and give her a swirly im thinking of adding a section where they take her wig and flush it it and the toilet clogs and floods seems like however i compose it i cant get the pacing and the flow right ... the first pages seem too conjested and cluttered ... too much is going on its distracting ... and the other pages ... well ... if i space things out too much the flow kinda slows down with more pages ... im not certain what to do im open to suggestions ... https://imgur.com/a/UPUSdFn hmmm ... maybe if i used these somehow instead ... https://imgur.com/a/eTcOQI7 ah hell ... its not like anyone cares about my IP so maybe it doesnt really matter how I approach this :/

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