Superman Samples

[tostesXXIII]

Some new Samples

[artsnake]

I think these are pretty good. the story telling is clear and the rendering is good.
there are some anatomy issues that I find distracting. the faces at the bottom of the first page I find through me off. I think they are too cartoony for the rest of the image.
panel 4 super man and the car in the back ground need work.
the last two panels the bad guys face goes a bit wonky. the first of those two the face and head are to wide or spread out and looks a bit different stylistically . the last panel his face looks flat.
some of this looks very polished it makes the out parts very noticeable.

[12013]

that's all pretty solid stuff. Artsnake mentioned stuff that I think I agree with. just a few tweaks would make them almost perfect...

on an random thought about these...just for me in my world.. I look at these and see what is such a staple in comic books.. the traditional fight in the city, with buildings being smashed, and people running scared... cars flipping.. it just makes me think about how much I in no way have any interest in drawing stuff like that. its just me but its seem so cliché and been done so much I just..cant even image trying and giving a crap.

anyway..sorry..just me thinking out loud. these pages look great man