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Danjoker · 11-12-2013, 10:43 AM

jeffo46 · 11-12-2013, 02:07 PM

Hi Dan , looking at these , I'm assuming that you're still very young , right ? Having said that , I as able to follow what was going on with this page and there is also a lot of energy to it, which is good. Now , what you need to work on are the following ,
anatomy ,
perspective,
line weights ,
and use photo reference when working on your backgrounds as well . At first I was thinking , how come there are scales on Superman's outfit, then I noticed you're drawing I guess what is a scene from The Man of Steel right ? Again , if you're going to do something that's from a film , photo reference is your best friend in situations like this if you want your work to be as accurate as possible to the source material . You're off to a good start and with some work , I don't see why in the future you can't be drawing comics for someone. Good luck and keep at it, okay ?

Danjoker · 11-13-2013, 12:31 PM

Thanks for critic my work jeff , my age is 32 years , think of your advice and will try to improve. regards

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Danjoker Registered User Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 37	Superman page

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11-12-2013, 02:07 PM	#2
jeffo46 BANNED Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 1,807	Hi Dan , looking at these , I'm assuming that you're still very young , right ? Having said that , I as able to follow what was going on with this page and there is also a lot of energy to it, which is good. Now , what you need to work on are the following , anatomy , perspective, line weights , and use photo reference when working on your backgrounds as well . At first I was thinking , how come there are scales on Superman's outfit, then I noticed you're drawing I guess what is a scene from The Man of Steel right ? Again , if you're going to do something that's from a film , photo reference is your best friend in situations like this if you want your work to be as accurate as possible to the source material . You're off to a good start and with some work , I don't see why in the future you can't be drawing comics for someone. Good luck and keep at it, okay ?

11-13-2013, 12:31 PM	#3
Danjoker Registered User Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 37	Thanks for critic my work jeff , my age is 32 years , think of your advice and will try to improve. regards