MARVEL Samples

davedrawsgood · 01-02-2014, 01:00 PM

Hi All,

I've just prepared some new sample pencils for MARVEL. Would love to hear what you all think of them. Thanks for looking!

Best,
Dave
dave@davedrawsgood.com

joshm · 01-02-2014, 02:19 PM

Your links don't work.

Eagle · 01-02-2014, 03:57 PM

Dave, you copy-pasted your links from another forum. Forums tend to make a habit of truncating long links by cutting out some stuff in the middle and replacing it with an ellipsis point.

Scribbly · 01-02-2014, 07:45 PM

These samples are looking very solid to me.

On a second view,
Page 2 panel 2,
Wolverine's pose and legs position are looking wonky and cartoony.
Page 2 panel 4,
Captain's, neck, trapezius, pectoral and deltoid aren't working well.
Neither the relation deltoid-biceps are.
Also Captain's eye is cut straight in the gutter line having plenty of room in the next panel.

Rather than that, very good pages.

.

davedrawsgood · 01-02-2014, 09:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eagle

Dave, you copy-pasted your links from another forum. Forums tend to make a habit of truncating long links by cutting out some stuff in the middle and replacing it with an ellipsis point.

Thanks for letting me know! They should be visible now.

davedrawsgood · 01-02-2014, 09:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by joshm

Your links don't work.

I think I fixed 'em. Please have another look!

davedrawsgood · 01-02-2014, 09:30 PM

Even more samples:

roryherman · 01-03-2014, 01:22 PM

everything looks very professional, my only nitpick would be the punishers head looks a little small, but that just might be me.

davedrawsgood · 01-03-2014, 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scribbly

These samples are looking very solid to me.

On a second view,
Page 2 panel 2,
Wolverine's pose and legs position are looking wonky and cartoony.
Page 2 panel 4,
Captain's, neck, trapezius, pectoral and deltoid aren't working well.
Neither the relation deltoid-biceps are.
Also Captain's eye is cut straight in the gutter line having plenty of room in the next panel.

Rather than that, very good pages.

.

A solid critique, thank you very much.

Rob Norton · 01-04-2014, 05:31 PM

you are way to good. get out of here. go get a job drawing comics.

01-04-2014, 05:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rob Norton

you are way to good. get out of here. go get a job drawing comics.

^what he said^

davedrawsgood · 01-04-2014, 08:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rob Norton

you are way to good. get out of here. go get a job drawing comics.

I'm trying brother, believe me!

Justice41 · 01-04-2014, 08:35 PM

Nice stuff some action issues and inconsistencies but nice. How did the tire on the car that was smashed by Cap wind up back in it's wheel well?
That last panel of your last post i would remove the mountain cliff thing altogether. It looks weird and out of place.

jeffo46 · 01-05-2014, 07:29 PM

I'm mostly a inker who has mostly done work for AC Comics, and I just salivate at seeing clean , old school, style pencils like these. If you ever need a inker let me know.

davedrawsgood · 01-05-2014, 09:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jeffo46

I'm mostly a inker who has mostly done work for AC Comics, and I just salivate at seeing clean , old school, style pencils like these. If you ever need a inker let me know.

Tell AC to hook it up! I'm looking for a gig.

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davedrawsgood Registered User Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Ferndale, MI Posts: 22	MARVEL Samples Hi All, I've just prepared some new sample pencils for MARVEL. Would love to hear what you all think of them. Thanks for looking! Best, Dave dave@davedrawsgood.com Last edited by davedrawsgood; 01-02-2014 at 09:25 PM.

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joshm Comic Book creator Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Colorado Springs, CO Posts: 639	Your links don't work. __________________ My Blog

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Scribbly Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Wicked Salem, MA Posts: 4,989	These samples are looking very solid to me. On a second view, Page 2 panel 2, Wolverine's pose and legs position are looking wonky and cartoony. Page 2 panel 4, Captain's, neck, trapezius, pectoral and deltoid aren't working well. Neither the relation deltoid-biceps are. Also Captain's eye is cut straight in the gutter line having plenty of room in the next panel. Rather than that, very good pages. . Last edited by Scribbly; 01-03-2014 at 06:50 AM.

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Justice41 Piss Off Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 9,821	Nice stuff some action issues and inconsistencies but nice. How did the tire on the car that was smashed by Cap wind up back in it's wheel well? That last panel of your last post i would remove the mountain cliff thing altogether. It looks weird and out of place. __________________ Don't pick a fight with an old man, the fact that he is old means he's a survivor. http://justice41.deviantart.com/ http://brokefingers.blogspot.com/

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01-02-2014, 03:57 PM	#3
Eagle Colourist Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 249	Dave, you copy-pasted your links from another forum. Forums tend to make a habit of truncating long links by cutting out some stuff in the middle and replacing it with an ellipsis point.

01-02-2014, 09:30 PM	#7
davedrawsgood Registered User Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Ferndale, MI Posts: 22	Even more samples:

01-03-2014, 01:22 PM	#8
roryherman Registered User Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 248	everything looks very professional, my only nitpick would be the punishers head looks a little small, but that just might be me.

01-04-2014, 05:31 PM	#10
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 3,990	you are way to good. get out of here. go get a job drawing comics.

01-05-2014, 07:29 PM	#14
jeffo46 BANNED Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 1,807	I'm mostly a inker who has mostly done work for AC Comics, and I just salivate at seeing clean , old school, style pencils like these. If you ever need a inker let me know.