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Great pencils and composition.
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marc, this is as good as some of the art I've seen in the comic that Gail Simone was writing. IMO anyway. Good, strong work!
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you have good anatomy skills love the last panel the best.
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Superb work!
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After tons of work, could been able to continue this samples.
Here´s next page 04 ![]()
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How old are you?
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What you wearing??? Ha ha
But seriously another awesome page. The only thing i dont like are the horses. |
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Not such a odd question, years ago when I was making the rounds I had more then one editor ask me the same question.
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I don't see clearly where Sonya's butt ends and where her horse's butt start in the first panel.
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The horse doesn't have a chain mail bikini.
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he asked me the same question. I figured he thought I drew horrible. and refused to give a critique as my artwork was so bad.
usually he gives good critiques. Quote:
now overall this looks professional grade stuff. the first panel could probably be corrected with just shading in the horses rear. or redo the horse and expand him. and if those back ground characters are needed in the script then move them as well. the poses seem ok but they are mediocre . it should be a little more dynamic with some better angle shots. I would say looks professional as I do not know how long he takes to do one page.
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First of all, thanks for the comments they really help me to realize my weak areas.And for shure i will make corrections. About my age i´m not as young as you could think but anyway here is next page.
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these are good pages bro. nice grasp of forms and good flow with the panels. only thing i might suggest is a smoother finish on the lines..might want to try a 2b pencil if your using hb at the moment. will give more weight to the lines. looks awesome so far and i checked your deviant page...that sonja cover mockup is killer
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