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Old 03-12-2016, 11:48 PM   #1
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Smile 4 page comic sample

Hello guys!!
My name is Andy. I'm an aspiring artist from Chile.
These are my comic samples, an attempt to show what i am capable. Of course i need improvement, and that's what i'm currently doing.
Please leave a comment if you want. All critics are well accepted too

These pages were made by me: Andres C. on Feb-March 2016









note: i'm kind of new in forums. If i'm doing something wrong, please let me know and i will correct it asap.

Thanks!!!!
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Nice work! Very clean. Pay attention to how people are put together -- anatomy and gesture -- as well as how mouths work. Don't crop figures at the ankles or wrists, never crop heads. Watch tangents -- lines that intersect or align with other lines when they aren't meant to do -- and make certain that your speed lines mirror your perspectival lines, they should never overlap. Nice shots.

Thanks for posting! Keep going!

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Thank you

Thanks Matt!!

Great advice and critique.
I took note of your comments and will keep them as a reminder in my next samples.

I appreciate your words!!!
Thanks a lot!!!
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