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Old 01-02-2014, 01:00 PM   #1
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MARVEL Samples

Hi All,

I've just prepared some new sample pencils for MARVEL. Would love to hear what you all think of them. Thanks for looking!

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Old 01-02-2014, 02:19 PM   #2
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Dave, you copy-pasted your links from another forum. Forums tend to make a habit of truncating long links by cutting out some stuff in the middle and replacing it with an ellipsis point.
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These samples are looking very solid to me.


On a second view,
Page 2 panel 2,
Wolverine's pose and legs position are looking wonky and cartoony.
Page 2 panel 4,
Captain's, neck, trapezius, pectoral and deltoid aren't working well.
Neither the relation deltoid-biceps are.
Also Captain's eye is cut straight in the gutter line having plenty of room in the next panel.

Rather than that, very good pages.


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Dave, you copy-pasted your links from another forum. Forums tend to make a habit of truncating long links by cutting out some stuff in the middle and replacing it with an ellipsis point.
Thanks for letting me know! They should be visible now.
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I think I fixed 'em. Please have another look!
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everything looks very professional, my only nitpick would be the punishers head looks a little small, but that just might be me.
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These samples are looking very solid to me.


On a second view,
Page 2 panel 2,
Wolverine's pose and legs position are looking wonky and cartoony.
Page 2 panel 4,
Captain's, neck, trapezius, pectoral and deltoid aren't working well.
Neither the relation deltoid-biceps are.
Also Captain's eye is cut straight in the gutter line having plenty of room in the next panel.

Rather than that, very good pages.


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A solid critique, thank you very much.
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Nice stuff some action issues and inconsistencies but nice. How did the tire on the car that was smashed by Cap wind up back in it's wheel well?
That last panel of your last post i would remove the mountain cliff thing altogether. It looks weird and out of place.
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I'm mostly a inker who has mostly done work for AC Comics, and I just salivate at seeing clean , old school, style pencils like these. If you ever need a inker let me know.
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I'm mostly a inker who has mostly done work for AC Comics, and I just salivate at seeing clean , old school, style pencils like these. If you ever need a inker let me know.
Tell AC to hook it up! I'm looking for a gig.
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