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Old 06-06-2006, 11:20 PM   #1
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New to the forums.....need some feedback

Hey whats going on all...I've been a lurker for a few months on these boards and I really respect the critiques given by posters. I'm just starting to get bcak into drawing and I wanted to know what you guys think of some of my work...mind you that I do not have a scanner so the quality might be a tad weak.

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Old 06-06-2006, 11:32 PM   #2
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Old 06-06-2006, 11:38 PM   #3
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Not too shabby. I'd probably work on your line work and shading. You'll need to practice hands a bit more. Also studying a good anatomy book seems to be a necessity for a piece like this.
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Old 06-06-2006, 11:40 PM   #4
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I see..you can go here and view my pics Myspace
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Old 06-06-2006, 11:43 PM   #5
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Cool, that works, Steven.
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My biggest peice of advice for you would be to study how muscles attach to the skeleton and how they interlace with each other. An example of what I mean is the deltoids which should attach to the clavicle. This gives them a more triangular shape as opposed to the circular shape you have. Your off to a good start.
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Old 06-07-2006, 12:02 AM   #7
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Yeah they do look very circular...thx for the input
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